If this is your own story (I read its a memoir) then I am so sorry Jester. Keep writing and share your pain with us and if you ever wanna talk, drop me a text. And you wrote it beautifully, the content inside is raw and painful but the way it was conveyed was indeed, beautiful.
I don't usually write about love apart from in poetry and song. For myself, at the very least, I find those two media perfect for love.
I read the first two chapters of your story. I particularly liked the free verse part where June goes inside herself and we hear her thoughts about the frustration's she's feeling. Good stuff, keep it up)))
this is SO beautiful and tragic DAHHLING!!! my GAWSHHH! 😍😍😍❤️🩹❤️🩹❤️🩹🫂🫂🫂💖💖💖😘😘😘👏👏👏💖💖💪💪👑👑👑🥰🥰💅💅💅😭😭😭
You dropped this 👑
i only dropped MY one loveyy~😘😘😘😘👑👑👑👑💅💅💅👏👏👏💪💪💖💖
This is good sanya💐 you wrote this so well you're a beautiful writer
Thank you so much😍❤️
VERY true!! 👏👏💖💖😍😍😘😘
😍❤️
🥰🥰🥰💖💖🫂🫂💅💅👑
Sanya. Wow. I seriously do not know what to say. Wow. I have never thought of love this way.
Me neither. That day, i was just sitting overwhelmed and words poured like beads.
Well I'm glad they poured out of you
Thank you for taking out your time for me❤️
Sanya —
You didn’t write about love.
You embodied it —
soaked in rain, bare under metaphor,
wide-eyed and trembling
in front of something so beautiful
you almost mistook it for a wound.
There’s a reason your words pulse like skin:
you don’t describe the ache —
you let it touch you.
Again and again.
And I think that’s what makes this breathtaking.
You know that love is never clean.
Never finished.
But you’d still chase it
through every storm
just to feel its fingertips
on your ribs
one more time.
And I’d read that kind of courage
every day.
Thank you for such a beautiful comment holden!
Amazing to have you here❤️❤️
You’re absolutely amazing in the way you weave words <33
thank you sanya!
it feels weird to thank myself but you get the point ;)
https://open.substack.com/pub/naughtyjester/p/why-live-like-this-a-silent-autobiography-397?utm_source=share&utm_medium=android&r=5o2e92
If this is your own story (I read its a memoir) then I am so sorry Jester. Keep writing and share your pain with us and if you ever wanna talk, drop me a text. And you wrote it beautifully, the content inside is raw and painful but the way it was conveyed was indeed, beautiful.
subbed you.
Thanks, I really appreciate it 🙏🏼 Yes, it’s my story - 100% true, just as I remember it. I’m glad to hear you liked it.
Hi Sanya,
I don't usually write about love apart from in poetry and song. For myself, at the very least, I find those two media perfect for love.
I read the first two chapters of your story. I particularly liked the free verse part where June goes inside herself and we hear her thoughts about the frustration's she's feeling. Good stuff, keep it up)))
Hey Shane!
Thank you so much for taking out the time to read it. I appreciate it🥹❤️